Tenielle, I really enjoyed reading your piece. The way you crafted your poem really helped me to imagine the scene that you were trying to create. I chose to read the poem first before taking a detailed look at the picture. You were able to capture each element of the painting in such a way that it strengthens the painting, rather than take away from it. For me, the first stanza didn’t flow as well as the rest. Otherwise, an excellent job.
Link to Tenielle’s Blog: https://thebestofliterature.art.blog/2019/09/02/the-balcony-2/
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