Evelyn, I loved your piece! It was interesting reading about your thoughts on Lawson’s work compared to Paterson’s. I personally prefer Paterson’s work but enjoyed your insight into why you like Lawson’s work. I can now see why Lawson’s work could also appeal to a reader over Paterson’s. I personally found the structure of theContinue reading “Peer Review Week 10: Evelyn”
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Peer Review Week 8: Tenielle
Tenielle, I really enjoyed reading your piece. The way you crafted your poem really helped me to imagine the scene that you were trying to create. I chose to read the poem first before taking a detailed look at the picture. You were able to capture each element of the painting in such a wayContinue reading “Peer Review Week 8: Tenielle”
Peer Review Week 6: Abby
I really enjoyed reading your blog Abby! Your thoughts on Lisa Bellear’s ‘Urbanised Reeboks’ intrigued me and seeing your thought process through the photo of your notes was interesting. Though overall it was a tad long, I appreciated the work that went into the analysis of each stanza. The use of quotes from the poemContinue reading “Peer Review Week 6: Abby”
Peer Review Week 5: Anna
Anna, I enjoyed reading your piece. I really liked how you not only clarified the meanings of each poem, but gave examples through texts that we have studied in the unit. I enjoyed the end sentence “…we have to deconstruct the poem before we can be enlightened by its message” as I feel this reallyContinue reading “Peer Review Week 5: Anna”